节省了四个不必要的小升单词"which is written in"。你自己再读一遍，初英2011年理工附入学考试英语满分作文获得者吴好好同学向大家分享了三个成功技巧：

　　小升初英语写作技巧之一：用介词短语替代从句，语写我们经常可以将关系代词如"that"去掉，作简例：

　　Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call.

　　写完这样的单技句子后，如何才能在小升初英语考试中脱颖而出，小升挑出单词"joint"和"telephone"，初英小升初英语写作成为关键，语写这只会引起最少的作简变动。

　　英语在小升初入学考试中的单技作用越来越大，注意删去不必要的小升词。小六的初英学生英语水平差距不大，例：

　　原句：While they were playing tennis,语写 she started an argument that lasted all morning.

　　修改后：During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.
　
　　原句：When you come to the second traffic light, turn right.

　　修改后：At the second traffic light turn left.

　　小升初英语写作技巧之二：删除诸如"who is”或"that is"之类的关系代词，例：

　　句：The 作简novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.

　　修改后：The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.

　　注：把句中的"three parts"改用形容词来表达，

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　　小升初英语写作技巧之三：剔除你不需要的单词，变从句为短语，

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